My art is finnaly improving well...kinda

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http://duku6.deviantart.com/#/d3gmta3

 

I really like this picture, and thats saying something, I NEVER LIKE ANYTHING I DRAW! this took me about 15 min, in between classes. Id love some feed back ^.^

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I NEVER LIKE ANYTHING I DRAW!

I know that feeling. Its like making a bunch of cookies, and then when you are done your not as hungry for them.

I like it a lot. Just the toes look off to me.

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I like the style. May I redline it? Smile One thing that really helped me improve my drawings was to see other artists' work.

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it would be amazing if you could do that for me, thank you so much ^.^ Im always hopefull I will discover new ways to do things, and watching the way other artist go about doing stuff is useally my base for improvment Highfive

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I cant make cookies with out burning them hahaha my art I feel is the same way XP Im glad you like it, I think the only thing I feel turned out better than useal were the torso and the hands....I can never get muzzles right for some reasin...

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duku, hello and nice to meet you, and if I may offer constructive criticism... the human anatomy looks great, but the bat wings are a bit off. I can share with you what I learned about bat anatomy when working on a Halloween costume. Basically, their wings are skin stretched between extremely long fingers. The part at the "peak" of the wing is where the thumb is.

Here's a little sketch study I did when working on that costume:

Now of course I understand you are drawing an anthro character and not an actual bat, but I do find it useful to really study the anatomy of an animal before trying to incorporate their features into an anthro character. Basically, I would alter your picture to have the ends of the wings extend more out past the wrist, and have some membrane above the arm bones instead of just below.

I hope that is useful to you!

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....and a BOOK!!

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This Is some great advice! thank you ^.^ Once I can find the time I will try to do some study work of my own into this charecter! thank you for the picture, it was very informative Laughing out loud

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Species: bear/lion hybrid
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It's better than anything I could ever hope to draw.

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